All Comments on 'Den of the Old God'

A promising story; it's just that I couldn't read past its first couple of paragraphs. Why? "It's" means "it is". "Its" means "belonging to it". This was just too painful.

That's been a bad habit of mine forever. I have resubmitted the story with proper its/it's usage. Hopefully it will be up soon. Thanks for the comment!

Well-done. Is there a part two?

Glad you like it, but no, I have no sequel planned, my itch has been scratched concerning this. Though for all my stories I leave the endings open ended enough so I can come back if I wanted to, so you never know.

Thanks for the comment!

These characters _really_ sound like Americans, so how could the Romans have dealt with this god? This threw me quite a bit.