All Comments on 'deRothchild - A Mediaeval Romance'

Interesting story! Please continue!

Do tell when we can expect it. You're off to an intriguing start!

I look forward to future chapters.

Why chose to set your story in a medieval world when you have so little regard to even the most obvious customs? It tears one away from the story.

For example - the names. Bobbi? Alex? Chris? No one would ever have had a nickname like that. All were called by their full Christian names.

Or a female peer of the realm with her arm in a cow's uterus? Would never have happened. Maybe in the Old West - but not in any medieval world.

It really hurts the willing suspension of disbelief necessary to enjoy a story.