All Comments on 'Desert Camp Ch. 01'

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Anonymous6 months ago

Wasn't there supposed to be 'ch 02'??

afosi2604 about 1 year ago

Still no second chapter?

Anonymousover 1 year ago

Why is it that you so often leave Stories unfinished?

Anonymousover 2 years ago

Finish the story, gollee!

linnear almost 5 years ago

So Good

Great story but you're such a tease with that ending.

AnyMoose over 5 years ago

Desert Camp 02?

Waiting for a Chapter 2?

Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

FTDS

PLEASE FINISH THE DANG STORY!

Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

What happened to Chapt. 2?

Love your writing

This_1guy over 7 years ago

Another chapter (or more) would be awesome!

General_O over 8 years ago

Where is chapter 2

Great story please write the next chapter

Reiner43 about 10 years ago

Good stuff!

A pleasant story that shows the good side of peoples characters, along with a nice dose of sexuality.

Anonymousover 14 years ago

Nice imagery

Loved the scenes you set. Very easy to picture the scene. Looking forward to part 2!

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