All Comments on 'Desire Becomes Reality Ch. 03'

It's a very good story. It's sensual and dirty at the same time.

I wonder what's going to happen next?? Please continue!

This is a great story, please don't stop now.

Great story, still waiting for the next chapter.

was wasted by telling the scene in third person POV from John. You should write of Anna and Mark feeling each other with no condom for the first time. A wasted opportunity. Spelling and grammar still needs some attention too.

It's just natural when a brotherly prick enters a sisterly cunt. Now it's time for a son's young dick to get shoved up his mother's wet twat. That's even more natural.

2Good story so far. 20 year old son needs to grow up and mother needs to show him the door.