All Comments on 'Desire of Brooke Ch. 01'

Not bad, but not so good either. Your style is okay. I like it. You let us see the situation well. But the story... You should think about it more. It's a bit template... Well, not bit. It's not so realistic, Brooke just step there and kiss Nikki and thats all. I need more.

If you write any other lesbian story, let's care about it! But for a first lesbian story, it's pretty good.

This was a great teaser if that's what you aimed for,

hopefully the new chapters will be longer.

Please, continue!

Good start.....what happened to chapter 2?