All Comments on 'Desires Exfoliated'

Hope she dies a horrible death, as she deserves.

They seem to have the same plot-

Just another run-of-the-mill cheating wife story. Author needs to keep his job at the call center in India.

Please write the next part

Is every Indian story on this site the same. _hange the names but not the plot Dumb Really dumd. Sorry I finished it.

Feedback: Stop trying to write erotic stories.

Go back to Bonglapaul and kill yourself in a traditional Indian Sucide, shove a cow up your ass.

or are they all just over grown piles of cow dung?

Was there a marriage here, i could not find it

the comments will tell you that you are an idiot but anyone that would post this story i believe already knows that.

I hate fucking cheaters. All should have an acid bath.

HA

blue all dont let the negetive comments bother you. one half thinks its pious (but cheats) the other half live in bliss cheating!!! good story but get more character into it with more conversations, truly like any good indian sex!!!!

best

He's going to be the top 10 writer very soon.

obviously english is your second language. but keep writing, look how far winterfrog has come!

But they don't think, or feel or experience. We never share in the characters' sensations. All plot, little insight, and I lost interest....sorry. But keep working at it.

Its high time, those who gloat about English, being their monopoly driven first language, start reading English written by others, whom they seem to despise and lampoon on daily basis.

I don't despise his English, it's better than.mine. I despise another Indian cuck story.

Nothing to see here! ONE tiny little star.