by litgrrl
With as few words as possible. Love the scene jumps, adds to the excitement of the story!
I would have enjoyed just a bot more development, but the ending was sweet.
Good story, but I did not like the style at all, plus it was too short in my opinion. Still a very good read though
but the kind you can relate to. Thanks and please keep writing.
Bits and pieces of good writing... which total up to a story not worth reading.
reminds me of my one boss in the restaurant McDonalds where I worked. She was about 45 and I was 20. She would close with me and another kid, but, she would send him home, and she would seduce me. We made love on her desk and I would eat her pussy. She was wonderful. Gave me blow jobs and rim jobs. That was in 1968. Loved to close with her.