All Comments on 'Desperate in the Lift'

how could she go months without an orgasm? i‘m not criticizing your story, just, are people really going that long without one?

I'm absolutely throbbing! Exactly the erotica thrill I've been craving. Now I need to go change my panties ;)

Very hot. IS there anything better than lesbian watersports? I thought the ending was a bit unnecessary (the daydreaming part) but the raunchy detail throughout was great.

Good story & well written.

This story is part of Dripping Wet, as is the sequel "Going in the garden." Visit lunaswift.com to find out more about me and my books.

There needs to be additional chapters for this story line, please? :-)

great twist as the end. very hot piss story. well done.

I loved it, Luna. Thanks. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Really enjoyed this story.

The thought of a girl dying to pee in a lift is great but the story is so much better by having another girl there to witness her desperation.

I love the bit where she pees all over her friend and imagines it soaking through her blouse!

U should do one about in da office like sneak off 2 the lift, supply closet or ur office or something don't u think...

Look forward to the Kinky Kontinuation.

Thoroughly enjoyed reading that. Will there be a follow up?

so well written !!

I need more of this......

Fantastic story. Well done.

Do continue.

omy best peeing story i'ver read in years hope theres a part 2 asap thanks

cant wait to read it again