All Comments on 'Determinism'

looking forward to more of this.

can't wait to read more!

We're waiting!

There will be more. I'm having some difficulty with the general tone of the story. Look for it just after the new year.

Yeah... I felt hate for the main female. And Pity for the man. Something has obviously happened in this characters life for her to act this way but I don't really care. I find myself wanting this story to be a horror so that someone would murder this woman. And because of that, the sex scene didn't do anything for me. Nicely done though. It was okay.

Good story wish you would continue it