All Comments on 'Deus Ex Machina Ch. 01: Vincenza'

Nice set-up, darling.

And you've been read and reviewed on the Story Review thread in AH.

FtF

Can't wait to see where the next chapter goes from here.

Well done, darlin'. Looking forward to seeing how the story plays out. ^_^

worried for naught. TK U MLJ LV NV p/s for DG. this story could have been carried out and possibly into a sci/fi or horror story. Recall I Robot, mlj