All Comments on 'Developing Feelings Ch. 01'

Very sweet and sexy!

Can't wait for Ch. 2 keep it up

delete and wait until you have a REAL story to post as is this was a waste of time. you need to make this atleast three times longer with more background, detail and character development.

I like where this is going but you seem to have dropped the ball on continuing the story. Please finish what you started. I liked it.