All Comments on 'Devotion'

Engaging, erotic, but...real. This is quality erotica at the top of its form: Sublime, transcendant.

Good job. If you're not already, you're well on your way to becoming a promising writer.

A stunning story. Well crafted. I agree, erotica at its absolute best. Leto423

Damned fine story! Thank you!

I love Delfina!

That is the way it happens. Two innocents and so natural, but the the horrible guilt, you understand my friend

Wow, this is a great, and a well written story!

Nice work!

Thank you for writing this in a way that doesn't denigrate his faith. How wrenching for him! It was fascinating how he was so resistant and trying to keep his faith, but then he just cut loose and rutted into her. Very well done. If you're gonna do it and only do it once, may as well do it right! One good thing is, his mother will have an unknown grandchild of his. I wonder if she'll notice the resemblance and recall that he never came home the night Delfina's mother died? Such a sweet story, and hot. Thank you for sharing it with us.

This… is a masterpiece.