All Comments on 'Diavolo Ch. 04'

Another great chapter. Thank you for sharing.

As a musician I'm liking this story. Keep it going.

Another good chapter, now we have to wait again!

Please love.... encore!!!!!!!

I am enjoying this just as much as your other works.this has an intense rhythm and frel and I am enjoying how they as a group interract.....

I just pray abby does do anything foolish to screw it up and she leaving already.... the drama the suspense...... I cant wait....

So great! I'm so wrapped up in this story! When is chapter 5 going to be up???

I love it. Abs is so out of her element its almost comical. I don't know how she thinks moving and getting a car will help. Her crazy family will track her down and Gab is smitten with her so he will find her too.

Do we have to wait soooooooooo long for the next chapter? (laugh) This story needs to keep coming. I am now into it after thinking that it would be boring. Surprise on me.

Great story, good writing but the whole angry, jealous, crazy ladiez trope is so old. Diamond, Mikayla, Paulina, Marjorie...that isn't realistic and it feels forced.

Also, if Mikayla and Abigail group up as friends it is very unlikely that Mikayla would behave as she is towards Abigail. She may be pissed but not crazy. Unless they had been pitted against each other as children.

Also, if Abigail knows the story behind Gabe, she shouldn't be confused about his whole revenge vendetta.

Finally, I really hope Abigail grows a backbone towards her family - she lets them push her around a lot more than make sense for someone who hasn't been around them in years it seems.

I'm looking forward to seeing where the story goes and really like Abigail and Gabe together I just wish there wasn't so much stereotypical women are jealous/crazy/only care about men shit.

Reading it once again and falling in love with the guys all over.

tons of dramatis personae...