All Comments on 'Diavolo'

Forgot to add to the title that this is the first chapter. There will be more to this story, obviously.

Good one!!! 😄😉😍

Nice, I couldn't stop read it was imagine the scenes like a movie.

Att: Denise Lopez

From yur usual, but I really liked it! Can't wait for more!

I like this story, I HOPE ( HINT,HINT) , A Happy Ending for Abigail and Gabriel. Don't stop now.

I like it better when you do sci-fi anyways

Leva darling,

This is new and it is not surprisingly as engrossing as the rest. I am anxious to see what else you bring to this world and these new persons... I cant call them characters because you have fleshed them out so well I feel as if I know them already..

my only thing is that I feel like I have swallowed alot of information that I could have taken in smaller bites.. meaning. .. it could have been stretched out a bit more.. but nevertheless. ..excellent work as usual...

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this 1st chapter and I'm looking forward to reading many more. It is very well written and easily worth 5 stars. Thank you.

Well, I'm pretty surprised with how many people voted on this! Last time I posted in romance, I think a month passed before it reached 20 votes AND the score was like a three point something, which to me is absolutely horrible. Romance readers are a hard group to please, so I wasn't expecting much with this new submission. I'm learning ;) 4's aren't necessarily bad, so, again I'm also surprised with the score especially here in romance where I usually bomb out (guess I suck at romance-lol). Anyhow, I posted chapt 2 Sunday and it will be available Wednesday. I'll try but can't promise a chapter every Wednesday . I've got a 9-5 job and only have the weekends available to write and edit. But thanks to everyone who's voted and left comments. I am eternally grateful for your interest and support.

LH

This is very simply written and easy to follow compared to your last story (which isn't a bad thing at all). I'm guessing you needed a change of pace, and I'm liking it so far! Maybe a bit overdramatic, or is that intentional? I smirked quite a few times, I'm thinking this is a less serious story. I'm eagerly awaiting the next instalment of your main story, but I don't mind a change either. Keep up the good work :)

Your wrting is good. It is just that the caracters are over the top.

Hope this works with your story.

Actually that's where I got the idea from. Corazon Salvaje. Loved it. This is my modern version of it, written my way, but the actual novel by Cardidad Bravo Adams is one I'd love to read. Unfortunately I haven't been able to find it anywhere :'(

I all most dropped my phone reading this story and I hit the grading s tasrs and it gave you a 2. To be honest I really like the story and I would rate it a 5. I enjoy the build up the ground work and the characters.

She could care less??? about luxury, especially when it stemmed from such heinous measures of depravity.