All Comments on 'Digital Camera Wonders'

by Hollow_Eyes

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Not bad

An origininal way to link the two story lines. Each person using the computer images to get off. Nice job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
good but

good but it is to bad you didn't continue and let us know what happened next did she get pregnant since you never said if she was on the pill did they continue what about the parents did they find out what about when she goes to college you kind left us hanging

TeddyrandalTeddyrandalabout 13 years ago
Good concept but...

It's a good story concept but it bounces all over the place for view point to view point which is distracting.

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