All Comments on 'Dinner and a Show'

5 stars, A very well plotted story. Janice was played very well by Jerry and John, working on her needs and her fear of those needs. I do not understand her that well, but I understand Jerry. I like to push my lovers into unexpected places and situations while keeping them 'safe'.

I read this story after reading, "Break Me". You capture the need and desires very well.

Thank you

Shows a deep understanding of the need she feels. Sure you can develop this in future episodes. Love to read more

I would never use the term "cunt slime". I have not considered alternatives as yet. Extremly wet is accurate.

Clever story I thuorly enjoyed this one. I didn't think he sold out the theatre, I thought a burleques show with her participation might of been part of the nights event's.

I very much liked your version. The lighting tech must of had a hard time of it....

I want that to happen to me, butt with a real audience, and audience participation bi both genders.

Great story, like it!

One of my favourite alternatives I use for cunt slime is cunt syrup. I like it very wet and very sticky.

Not my usual interest, but spun the wheel so to speak. This is well written and a great read, keep writing, I'll be following along!

Loved giving her the fantasy while still protecting her.