All Comments on 'Dinner for Three Ch. 01'

by Jet_Lagged

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Not romance

Should be in Group Sex, then I wouldn't read it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Put it where it belongs. GROUP SEX, it's not romance.

klbsexybiggirlklbsexybiggirlover 11 years ago
Perfect

great romance, great suspense, great sex, loved it!

pope32767pope32767over 11 years ago
It most certainly is romance

True Love isn't always just what people expect it to be, and categories are so rigid anyway.

I look forward to the next chapter!

Jet_LaggedJet_Laggedover 11 years agoAuthor
From the author - stick with it for the romance

Chapter 2 and (eventually) 3 are more about the developing relationship. Romantic entanglements are not just between two people. Sometimes things are a bit messier.

MikefromAZMikefromAZover 11 years ago
Not a Typical Romance...

But this is romance. I think this what I like about this and the following chapter. It is a good slow build to a type of romance that exists but is normally labled as polyamory and threesomes.

Continue writing I am enjoying this thus far.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
One of the best yet!

Nice buildup, and kept getting more and more erotic. Yes, romance. Natalie and Adam sharing their affection equally with Laurie. Too bad more people can't be so non-selfish and non-jealous.

auhunter04auhunter049 months ago

Last line knocked it outta de paark

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