by aussie_sin
Aussie sin,
Your story moves very fast, right through the erotic phases to conclusion. Take very little time to read, an furthermore reads quite well. Nicely done, my friend.
I will offer the kiss of death for an Australian as a Pom I liked your story
While I normally enjoy a story that allows the plot to build and gets to the finale slowly, this write-up is a nice change. I enjoyed the suspense as I was reading through it.
Too bad Stephannie didn't join the party!
Nicely done. Reminds me of a time when I did something similar, but that's another story!