by Patroklos
Lovely intimate look at a marriage of two people without the sordid details. The whole story, though short, was sweet, tender and loving. Sort of a short burst of happiness.
NICE EASY BUILD UP TO A FINAL COMPLETION OF THE SATISFYING LOVE MAKING ACTION. MORE PLEASE
Nice content. It builds nicely to a great ending. Thank you for the time and effort it took to write the story.
It was a respectful and arousing synopsis of a welcome home warrior in a later day setting.
Nice work writer - more please if you wish.
His wife throws fantatic parties. I am sure he will be more than willing to attend the ones in the future!!
Loved this story.
A party he didnt want to attend at first (at the end of a long day) turned out to hopefully be the first of many! Great story!
It's good to read the story involving a husband and wife is only with each other! ~ This one was short but sweet. ~ 5 ~