All Comments on 'Dirty, Dirty Girl'

Dont listen to the Anon they ruin this site. Good effort, more dialogue would be nice and the lead in was a little short. Missing the conflict required to jump from faithful to unfaithful. If you're going to write a more porn based story with less character development at least expand on the sex.

Again Thanks

and well-written

Well done. Hope you have more of these hotwife stories in your head and you share them soon. Thanks.

But Syd didn't notice that the Anon's are both positive!!! That probably won't last, since this LW flash-tale has a Loving Wife (by LIT's criteria - and it IS their site) in it as the central character.

5*

I'm fine with negative comments, even overly negative comments, as long as they have some point about the writing or the story. I'll delete anything that's simple name calling or abject moralism about the genre. Don't like the genre? don't read it. Thanks to those of you who've given feedback. It's much appreciated.

so you did good on her character - now she gets to have a "female problem" until she is sure he did not giver her an SDT to pass on to the fool she calls her "loving husband". of course the cock was pretty stupid - fucked a stranger with out a bag on it - so what will he get? 5

...there is so little context to this story it says nothing.

Philosopherx, simply enjoy pissing off the anon retards. They don't have anything better to do in their lives than show off their mental weaknesses.

Nice, quick read. Don't let the trashy anonymous feedback you're sure to get bother you. Negative criticism from anyone who's unwilling to identify themselves isn't worth worrying about.

Outstanding read.

Ask Rick if he got her address....now, please :))

Good story - would have enjoyed a longer adventure - but still good.

A delightfully succinct stroker. Appropriate title. How could anyone not like this?

Enjoying your oeuvre.

-alextasy

Are we supposed to be impressed that she is a cheating whore? Your writing is fine, your characters suck.

Very hot