by ichabodstinks
What the author stated at the beginning was basically true; although there was more sex than originally stated. Second, though, the author had promised a well written tale; it was, but there also was one instance of bad English. Have others noticed it yet? Thank you for writing.
I think this was one of the best stories I have read yet . I would not say there was bad English, there were 2 words that were out of place !! But then again are we reading a story of teaching a English class.??
This story is nicely written. I read the other comments, but could not find the problems they indicated. This was smooth and easy to ready. The action moved right along, so the pace did and wish to read more of this type of writing.