All Comments on 'Dirty Little Secret Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Tiffany

Ok, you have us titalized, what is Tiffany's story?

X S sexX S sexabout 17 years ago
Good awakening story..

Nice- the dad daughter relationship would be a nice story, especially if it involved a threeway. Also, bringing the sisters and maybe even the mother into it could make this a nice series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
filthy salacious pornography

loved it. I hope you will keep writing.

bradm75bradm75about 17 years ago
You never fail to get my cock hard!!!

Thanks for another great story baby!!! I should have mine submitted today :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
NICE

enjoyed the story, but I hope this is not the end. Looking forward the the next chapter. Keep it up.

MilliemoonMilliemoonabout 16 years ago
Very nice

Beautifully written and totally hot. Loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
grammar nazi

you should definitely have someone proofread your next story before submission. it would have been hot were it not for the countless grammatical, spelling, and typographical errors.

whoreallyknowswhoreallyknowsalmost 16 years ago
Teasing!

"Was she really an actual lesbian or was she just horny with no boys around? I didn't find out the answers to the questions for many years to come. That's a different story."

You are really the biggest tease ever! Great story, waiting for more!

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 15 years ago
Liked it a lot . . .

. . . but you gave up on the series way too soon. There was so much more to enjoy.

pr3ttyinp1nkpr3ttyinp1nkalmost 12 years ago

This is seriously so hot. Got off so many times reading this!

Can't wait for more, if there is any!

flowernibblerflowernibbleralmost 11 years ago
One fucking good story.

Yes, this story and Ch. 01 are both really hot. Perhaps this story teased me more. Probably because Tiffany went down on Jennifer and Jennifer loved it as much as she had loved sucking Tiffany's dad's cock.

You pack of lot of hot into a small space.

More, please. I am hooked and how!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More!

very hot, demanding more of this series

Danno_61455Danno_61455over 10 years ago
JUST AS GOOD AS CHAPTER ONE

You have one of your readers smiling from how well you can roll a first person point of view into words. I'd enjoy reading more of your work when there is time.

mazzmemazzmeabout 9 years ago
a lust filled adventure

This erotic chronicle was well written... mostly. Portions of it had part of me giving a standing ovation for the descriptive events that take place. My only complaint was that the story had serious potential to be extended.

RibaldAmusementRibaldAmusementalmost 9 years ago
Delicious!

Delicious. I would have enjoyed if Tiffany licked her fathers cum out of her friend, but it was a very sexy story that caused me to get very aroused and stroke myself to completion and to me that is the highest form of flattery for a writer. your words moved me to orgasm. Thanks!

theghostwritertheghostwriterover 4 years ago
Great

Loved this story. Will there be a part three?

Canes818Canes818almost 2 years ago

Love it. Would love to hear more stories or really love to chat with you. Can play with us both or just me

OneLongSchlongOneLongSchlongalmost 2 years ago

OMFG! This is one of the sexiest & hottest stories I’ve ever read! VERY stimulating 🤤💦🤤

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Very well written! Enticing storyline all through. You are a sexy story teller!

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