by JustPlainMerrie
Nice- the dad daughter relationship would be a nice story, especially if it involved a threeway. Also, bringing the sisters and maybe even the mother into it could make this a nice series.
Thanks for another great story baby!!! I should have mine submitted today :)
enjoyed the story, but I hope this is not the end. Looking forward the the next chapter. Keep it up.
you should definitely have someone proofread your next story before submission. it would have been hot were it not for the countless grammatical, spelling, and typographical errors.
"Was she really an actual lesbian or was she just horny with no boys around? I didn't find out the answers to the questions for many years to come. That's a different story."
You are really the biggest tease ever! Great story, waiting for more!
. . . but you gave up on the series way too soon. There was so much more to enjoy.
This is seriously so hot. Got off so many times reading this!
Can't wait for more, if there is any!
Yes, this story and Ch. 01 are both really hot. Perhaps this story teased me more. Probably because Tiffany went down on Jennifer and Jennifer loved it as much as she had loved sucking Tiffany's dad's cock.
You pack of lot of hot into a small space.
More, please. I am hooked and how!
You have one of your readers smiling from how well you can roll a first person point of view into words. I'd enjoy reading more of your work when there is time.
This erotic chronicle was well written... mostly. Portions of it had part of me giving a standing ovation for the descriptive events that take place. My only complaint was that the story had serious potential to be extended.
Delicious. I would have enjoyed if Tiffany licked her fathers cum out of her friend, but it was a very sexy story that caused me to get very aroused and stroke myself to completion and to me that is the highest form of flattery for a writer. your words moved me to orgasm. Thanks!
Love it. Would love to hear more stories or really love to chat with you. Can play with us both or just me
OMFG! This is one of the sexiest & hottest stories I’ve ever read! VERY stimulating 🤤💦🤤
Very well written! Enticing storyline all through. You are a sexy story teller!