All Comments on 'Discipline from Another'

Why is it that stupid authors want to make the reader the centre of their story, when they know nothing about them. I may be female, I may be male, I may be a lesbian. All of these people find your use of second person in telling your story a little off putting if not downright offensive. Leave second person to letters to love ones, birthday cards or tech manual. it certainly doesn't work here

Great story. Please ignore the negative criticism. I liked the premise and the otk position for the spanking. I would like to have sen some ass play for further humiliation.