All Comments on 'Discovering Christina Ch. 04'

Articulate and expressive with a great plot. Keep up the good work and don't delay with the next installment.

The following passage is one of my favorites, perhaps because I enjoy having a woman running her fingers through my hair as I savor her delicate giblets and her giblet gravy. She can yank my hair or scratch my scalp if she wants.<br />

<i> "Oh, god, that feels so good," she panted, reaching down to tangle her fingers in my hair and gently move my face a little to a spot that brought her even more pleasure. I ran my tongue around her outer lips, then up and over her mound, and finally lower to her tight little rosebud. I circled it with my tongue, causing Christina to flinch just a little with my unexpected attention there. Then I proceeded to make my tongue as broad as possible and lick her from her rosebud to her clit, then back again. I made that trip over and over, up, then down again, until my mouth was slick with her <b>nectar</b>, which was abundant by this time.</i>

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There nothing like having a woman wantonly spreading her legs in front of you and opening up the flower of her womanhood for you, even exposing her clitty by pulling the clit hood back. That’s hot. Some women are too demure to behave so boldly; but, to others, it seems to come naturally. And they benefit from it! The following passage captures this well:<br />

<i> "Oh yes, yes, yes," she hissed, as I curled both fingers and massaged her g-spot [G-spot], which by now was swollen and easily located. As I caressed that sensitive little pleasure center, I went back to work with my tongue. This time, however, Christina helped me, reaching down to pull her <b>hood</b> back and <b>expose her glistening pearl</b> more fully to my tongue. "Oh fuck, Ross, fuck," she whispered over and over as I flicked her clit with the tip of my tongue and continued to flutter my two fingers inside her.</i>

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The clenching of a cunny in the throes of a climax is hot, hot, hot. And a guy can feel that clenching better around his fingers than around his shaft. Her arching of her back is another effective mention in the following passage:<br />

<i> This time my touch had no gentleness to it. It was hard, aggressive, urgent, as I furiously thrust my fingers in and out and sucked hard on her clit. I continued for what seemed like quite a long time, and with each passing moment, her pleasure seemed to build and build, until finally she <b>arched</b> her back and her pussy begin to pulse and throb. I felt that involuntary <b>rippling</b> of the muscles in her tunnel as she <b>clenched</b> around my fingers over and over and over. </i>

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Thanks for your vivid descriptions.

one of my fantasies is to get fucked in the open air where anyone could come across u's it is such an exciting idea and you describe it so well!! I can't wait

to hear what happened in Dallas! luci x

That was a huge waste of time... No real character development. Actually, none since the first part.