All Comments on 'Disneyland Adventure'

I cannot wait for the next chapter of this story!

Even with the the few mistakes in editing it was super fun!

I hope you plan to continue to add many adventures for sweet Ashely and her Master.

Being a Dom myself I must tell you that your story is the perfect example of what thrills me about the sub/dom relationship. You are able to capture the moment of surrender and the sweet seduction leading up to it. Thank you for providing me with such a vivid picture of your decent into slavery and lust

I'm going to faint.

I love the story, but the style was just a little to stilted for my tastes. Definitely a great start though, and I look forward to seeing more form the author!

Very nice fantasy; the kind i enjoy as well. Certainly looking forward to more and reading what she is put through for everyone's mutual enjoyment.

your story made me so hot, my pussy is so wet, i wish i was her and had someone do that to me, i need you to continue this!!