All Comments on 'Distribution Ch. 03'

i very much enjoy your writing, i apologize for not voting until now, please keep up the great work

It was unexpected to start this second series while the first story was being finished. It's not a bad thing and in fact makes it kind of interesting to see the details filled in, while the main protagonists life is unfolding later in time............I can't decide if the detail of the business side of the story is too much a part of the plot, or just helps flesh out the relationships between the characters?...........In any case, I can't wait for each chapter to appear so I can see where it is all going.

So far the story is very interesting but it is moving a bit slow for me. I am looking forward to the next installment in the story.

The telling is slow and gives a depth in time. The content is very interesting.