All Comments on 'Divine Intervention'
by AJ_Watson
- 9 Comments
nigilalmost 16 years agoDifferent from other storys. Made me remeber my own lone and fearful days at school all those years ago. (Though not nearly this bad.) Story was maybe a bit too predictable and I missed some more dramatic scenes and turn of events (a little `flat'), that's what stories are for after all, especially in my favored scifi/fantasy category? Good writing and character drawing, captured me. Very promising. Keep it up. I'll check back.
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoWhat an absolutely lovely story! I have occasionally thought of the intersection between faith, desire, and sexuality/sensuality, but you've done a marvelous job of showing how they can intertwine in a human context. Tender human sexuality, with a touch of feeling to it!
Bravo! Encore!
Anonymousover 15 years agoI mean imagine someone in Scotland pulling a knife on you. Decent story despite the ending. -- UK CYNIC.
taco1085over 4 years agoI read the story and the more I read the more I liked. Interesting spin and thanks for a good read and challenging the status quo...
