All Comments on 'Divorce'

You painted an excellent picture of a woman who reevaluated her relationship and came to the correct conclusion. He was not the man she fell in love with and she was better off without him. Good job.

I will write my story later still to hard to tell but I am a man who was wronged big time. I feel your pain, misery loves company. I am 35 and my wife left me for drugs and her dealer, which is a dick - pussy he or she has both, bad thing is she was the best looking woman that I have ever seen in my life and it has been 2 years and she has lost some teeth and aged 25 years in two years amazing that drugs can kill the person you knew. Craftsmantruck47@netzero.com

This is a very realistic story that cries for a resolution. Her situation is all too common--for both men and women--although things are probably not so black-and-white as she thinks: he is likely not quite as big a jerk, and she is not quite as blameless. Her voyage of discovery and recovery--understanding how they failed as a couple and what she needs to do in the future, and then watching her go out and find happiness--would make an excellent longer tale.

Most of my thought already written down by the other three!

If you can, please add a sequel, if there is one!

It is real, a problem, not always solved and sometimes leading to tragedy.

Thanks

John

The progression and lyrical tone of your vocab was very compelling. I hope you're enjoying living it up now that's all out of your system. Most often it's the ghosts of men you've loved and not their present selves that are hardest to let go of, katgirl_23

He changed in front of you right :) Those who initiate it often do... To make others believe your lies you first have to believe them yourself... So when your parter changes shape this way in front of you, his/hers lies has already become their new reality... :) Let it go. There are better things to do... Cheers Yoron.

this had more the taste and feelings of the ramblings of an idiot than anything else. After your marriage is over is to late to look for ways to make it better. Marriage like all of life is an evolving process, unless you evolve with it you get left behind. Anyone that types so badly with PCs and such that an A paper becomes and F really isnt equipped to survive in rhe real world. For instance the sexy lingerie should have been a part of their marriage not something brought in to revive or bring it back to life. Sounds more like I opened my legs for you and married you, what more do you want?