by fawnie
Thanks your little story got me through a boring day at work, I was smiling and remembering my first time.
Wow... a very sexy, sensuous story. Well written and extremely erotic... I enjoyed the pacing as well. You took your time, but it was never dull. Keep up the good work. :)
I just read your story, I really enjoyed it to include the romatic level of the story, not the slam bam thank you mam as most stories have, to bad that you brought it to such a sudden ending, I would have loved of reading more about it.
I would be able to read it forever on end, thanks again, keep up the good work,
jodi
That was hot!!!!!
I could almost feel her touch (or was that My hand lol )
Help! I've fallen and can't reach my keyboard! Great story knocked me out of my chair. Nice, smooth, sexy and made me want more. Just what you intended?
Very well written.Held my attention till the end.
I felt cheated a bit because there was no sequel but I guess that is how good stories are.They leave you wanting more.
Well done.
This the first of your stories that I have read so I will now start on the rest. Perhaps there is a sequel..I havent checked.
Lawley