All Comments on 'Dominating Vanessa'

This five-star cracker was a wonderful introduction to your talent as a writer. Thank you so much for joining Literotica and for writing and sharing this excellent story with us. I hope there will be many more to come!

Again, my thanks - and welcome!

Well written, much enjoyed. Thank you. 5*****!

Thanks for a well-written sexy story. Great job showing Vanessa's emotions as her inhibitions gradually break down. Very erotic.

Very well written and very hot!

I think that you got such a nice balance in this, describing both the action and her thoughts and feelings. Also, it didn't get too extreme or unrealistic.

As another commenter said, I will look out for more stories that you write in the future

You read my mind. I love it. He Dominated her but didn't hurt her. She loved it and I loved placing myself in her place.

I wish my husband would read this and mimic it!!!!! I could feel her and what he did. I wish I was her for this story.

WOW! I'm going to somehow have to get my husband to read this story and tell him I want to be Vanessa. 5 stars!

While I am not really into BDSM, I found this story very well written and enjoyable. The descriptions were excellent and it was easy to follow. The portrayal of a loving husband trying something new to please his wife was a great theme. It was also pretty damn sexy.

Loved it. Well written, richly detailed, believable. It's really hard to get the right balance of consent and force in a story like this, and you pulled it off beautifully. Good use of toys, too, and just a touch of pain but not torture.

Short and sweet! Love this take again and again.

This is a vivid and sensitive description of how Tom loves Vanessa. Your words paint a clear picture allowing the reader to see the action. Well done.