All Comments on 'Don't Ask, Don't Tell Ch. 02'

by myndstorm

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Yikes!

Fucking Yikes!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Got anyone in this story that isnt HIV positive?

How do you know?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Funny???

Yes, it is going to be funny and a little sadening when has to tell Cheryl that he has an STD and she should get checked by her docotor ASAP. All of the other marriages will survive, but I have a feeling that their's will be the not survive. And guess what, it will be all because of his infidelity. Poor old boy could not keep his dick in his pants. He really isn't very smart if he lets all of his wife's friends get into his pants.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Very Nice Work!

Very realistic without being overdone. So is Andi next?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ANYWAY

I have a pet peeve against unfinished stories. --

I do not knowingly start them.

So glad I did not know -- or I'd have missed an entertaining read.

Something about myndstorm's compelling casual style sucked me in -- and kept me.

It would still be nice to have what Paul Harvey used to call "the rest of the story."

But what is there is so good -- and pretty much a story of its own -- plus such great use of the English language, that it is worth ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐.

Paul in Oklahoma

26thNC26thNCabout 2 years ago

Fat whores cheat too.

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