All Comments on 'Don't Ask'

LOVE THIS STORY :)

Main thing that would have made it better would have been a more prolonged dénouement. A bit more about his mom and grandma as the ones who suspected but didn't say anything, a bit about Amy and whether she felt guilt about outing him and getting him badly injured, a bit more about how their relationship evolved past day 1. It just felt a little rushed.

i thought the story was beautiful and well very hot, thank you for posting it

I loved this so much . Wish it was longer

I ? this story! Awesome job!

omg! this was absolutely amazing keep writting please!

What a great story! So believable and very well written. Could have been twice as long... I never write comments, but I had to tell you how much I enjoyed your writing. Maybe because I've been that much in love with my best friend. My story, however, would be about unrequited love... much sadder. Your story was so beautiful because they were able to make their love and passion real. Thank you and please keep writing.

My god it was so good..i thought I'm reading script of a romantic movie

I just wish that if Amy could get a punch in her face