All Comments on 'Don't Call My Son Names'

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Suite21menSuite21menover 10 years ago
Tahnee's Plot

Well, we know about the son's ten inch cock and the married woman but we don't know about whether Tahnee and Sam had sex that night or that was all a ploy. If they did, would it be satisfying to Tahnee if Sam doesn't have a ten inch cock like Mark had. Also, I couldn't figure out if Sam was in on the plot or just a pawn in Tahnee's game.

Iread2relaxIread2relaxover 10 years ago
5 stars

Wish I could give 500 stars. Enjoyed it.

galisongalisonover 9 years ago
Nicely written except for a couple parts

Not exactly my kind of story, if only cause I'd prefer more of an age difference or something.

I think at times you went overboard with descriptions. One line that stood out to me was 'nipples like oysters.'

What does that mean?

TonyKiwiTonyKiwiover 8 years ago
made out good

Veronica soon found out all was not roses. Their house was mortgaged to the max and the divorce settlement meant selling the house and splitting the assets which amount to zero after the legal fees. Her asshole ex split to places unknown leaving V with no money, a big legal bill for the divorce as well as her car payments and no income or job. V ended up living with T.I. and Tahnee and worked two part time jobs trying to pay off her bills. Tahnee had little to spare as a solo mom bringing up a young man and saving for his college education, which was looking like a steep up hill battle. Tahnee was thinking about renting out a room to a boarder to make some money, she heard Sam was looking for a place to stay as his wife had kicked him out and was suing for divorce. I guess word always gets around some how. He only has 6 inchs to work with but it's all he's got so a girl with have to make do. Veronica made out good she's got her 10 inchs so what more could she want. TK

TonyKiwiTonyKiwiover 8 years ago
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still gave it a #5 as it was well writing just a whimsical tale of make believe. TK

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