All Comments on 'Don't Ever Give Up Ch. 07'

I've enjoyed every one of your cliffhangers but this one? Nooo. Unacceptable. Now I have to wait hours just to read what happens, to find out how Julia responds to finding out her sister is a total bitch. To reading Tim's reaction. How could you put me through such agony!?!

Okay, okay, okay. You've got a great story here! I'm loving it, even if you are being a bit cruel with the chapter cutoffs. ;) Can't wait to read the next installment!

i sort of guessed that the former flame would show, but the half-sister is just to juicy not to mention hilarious and i hope that both she and carlos get a wake up call and tim and julia finaly figuire it out permantly

THis is my least favorite update so far. Not that the writing isn't excellent as always but it's gone a bit too "soap operary" for me. Although I'm sure some will argue still very realistic. Hope this doesn't signal the end for Julia and Tim.

Tune in tomorrow... The funny thing is that as well as reminding me of "Our Gal Sunday" and other soap operas of

the 1940's, it is the sort of plotting that Will loved...

Good twist you threw in here, I must say. I don't think you'll feel the need to delete me this time, but I still believe it's slapstick. Plenty of opportunity to spin this yarn from here. Chapeau!

OH I LUV THIS TWIST OF EVENTS! I CANT WAIT TO C WAT COMES NEXT!

you go girl.

I saw this coming from a mile away, but still it was outstanding. Tim does act a little childish. If my woman would have done to me what this bitch did I would thank the gods for her showing me what her true nature was. I love this story. Good job. Luis

Like others, I saw it coming, but the dialog and setup was just great........Now to see if she actually decks her half sister, or just how it plays out, but I know it gonna be gooooood!!!

Your good, can't wait to see if Julia does a verbal or physical number on Ashley. For that matter, how Tim handles it. I really liked the fact that JT put his arm around Ashley and told Tim that she was just one of the fuck buddies following Carlos around. Normally, I would think that this scene would do it for Tim. Are we going to have a heart attack or are you going to get Julia moved in with Tim?

Fantastic chapter, but something was bugging me. In chapter 5, Tim's confession while Julia was listening included mentioning Leira's name. How many Leira's does Julia know? She should have tumbled on to who Tim's former girlfriend was. Could have guessed that Julia knew Leira, or Carlos was fucking Leira, but did not see both coming. Great scene at the end.

A 10 !!!! So far, Love the drama, now the Irony.

On to the end.

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Fate is indeed a cruel bitch god damn

This is going to get "right bloody interesting" as my British cousins would say. Looking forward to the next chapter...

Loved this chapter x

Going out with Leira forever. Planned to.marry but never met her family.

Also not a common name maybe Susan would have been better but Leira. That should have rung bells.

Whoa...WOW!!!

Julia saw a photo of Leira but didn't recognize her but Leira is her half sister. Gotta proof read your story.

I don't normally comment in the public forum, but the last comment is incorrect. Read it again, carefully, and tell me where Julia saw a picture of her half sister. I took great care to ensure she never saw the picture. The other three did, but they put it away before she came back with the water.

Looking at the comments, They are dated 7 years ago, but I have to reply. She NEVER saw her sisters photo. The others did. But now I can't wait to get to part 8, so excuse me while I run.