All Comments on 'Don't Gamble With a Gambler'

hope you continue the story

that was so hot! now all i have to do is get my boyfriend to play a game of poker with me....

Hope you don't mind a little criticism. LOVED the story idea, it was great, well written. However, I would encourage you in the future to draw things out a little more. What did each body part look like during the game? What did they talk about while out drinking? And so on.