All Comments on 'Don't Knock It Til Ya Try It'

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0ra11yfix8ed0ra11yfix8edover 17 years ago
No way to knock it

All the right notes; masturbation, cum eating, cock sucking, more cum eating, an enema, a quick ass fucking, more cum eating, more cock sucking. From curious to cum slut in twenty four hours,where can I find George?

nycmmnycmmover 17 years ago
Hot

I loved it. Tell me more! Do you and george want to show me how?

amasterfoundamasterfoundover 17 years ago
over good story

Over all this was a good story. I did see a few errors where the paragraph split but shouldn't have been or where you could have combined pargraphs. I suggest next time sending to a volunteer editor. I could have done with out the mental image of the enema. Just a few minor problems. The story it self was very good please keep up the work.

This story will be mentioned on the authors hangout review thread

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Hot...

...and pretty believable tracing from repulsion to curiosity to taking action. I agree you could have cut the detailed description of what was done with the turkey baster. There are also lots of ways to describe an erection other than "throbbing member." Puhleeze. Good show nonetheless. Best, Ken

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I agree_______don't knock it until you try it. I remember the first time I sucked s cock. When I took it into my mouth I thought that it was wonderful. When. He came in my mouth, I knew I was meant to be a cock sucker.

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