All Comments on 'Don't Think, Breath...'

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ne_summit about 15 years ago

WOW!!!

this is a story that so needs to be continued!

Scotsman69 about 15 years ago

very fine story

You definitely have something here. An original plot, the improbability of which is totally overwhelmed by your writing ability.

A very fine story indeed. Head and shoulders above the Lit crowd. Well done! I'm off to read your others.

Anonymousabout 15 years ago

Great!

Please continue!

Mandasy123 about 15 years ago

Oh yeah! That was amazing

This is beyond amazing. I've never really seen myself getting into the whole mind reading stories but this amazing. Great job! I definitely think that you should make a second.

Paradox over 13 years ago

A fun read

I don't know that I would want anyone reading my mind at a first meeting, but I sure like the way this one worked out. Good stuff. I'm anxious to read more.

lotsojunk almost 13 years ago

Yes please continue!

Anonymousabout 10 years ago

Very Interesting and H O T

I would be interested in a follow on to this story, they seem to be made for each other.

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