All Comments on 'Don't You, Darling?'

Hot little story, nice build of tension but then a little quick at the end. Daddy should have lasted longer, being Daddy.

I loved not just the rhythm of your story but how you didnt waist time with much back ground, the little back ground you did use was sexy and added to the intensity, I used the story the first time i read it came back two hours later and used it again

this is a very stupid story. at the same time it doesn't provide any interesting plot. i think you better write in a less boring fashion.

Hot, with a great spanking scene - would still like to have seen the characters fleshed out a little more, both with a physical description and their personalities.

For most people, the excitement of a sexual situation is a cerebral reaction to physical stimulae. You write very well, but you need - in my opinion - to flesh out your characters. Simply describing what happens to sex organs is fine for a medical journal, I guess; it isn't erotica - to me. What happened to the MIND of a character is far more important than what happened to a nipple or a clitoris. Use of slang words (e.g.'cock') might be 'dirty', but it is not erotic!

If you're into the daddy/daughter fantasy, this story is great! I most certainly am, and without any further character buildup, the relationship and background is established with few words. To jump into an erotic interaction takes skill and an ability that not everyone has. I was suprised to see the previous negative comments, because this is exactly what I look for when I read a story in this genre.

Well done, ms_girl23! Five stars.

Yuk, Yuk, Yuk, and more Yuk!

your story lacks any sense of credbility.one does not change one sexualpreferance because one gets rape. and your story should of been pput under non consent reluctense.not taboo or incest. the daughter was force pure and simple.

i think anyone who liked this story should go to hell. why would anyone want to get off from a story where a dad rapes his daughter.

A stupid load of unbelievable, sadistic crap.

Stan

I like this type of story, so don't listen to the others who do not. Write more often...don't procrastinate! I enjoy reading your stories.

I loved the others. I don't mind nonconsent and all that.. Love and Love Intensely is still my favourite story ever.. A Dangerous Gentlemen was brilliant..

But the idea of a father screwing his daughter just sickens me. I'm sorry. I still think you're a great writer, and I sorta forced myself to read this because I thought you wrote well, but I just had to stop halfway..

I don't know. All that incest stuff just disgusts me. And a lot of people out there too, apparently.

I THOUGHT THE WHOLE STORY WAS SEXY AND FUN. WRITE MORE.

TEXAS62

Great story. Don't worry too much about the losers who commented previously and gave you a poor rating. They're full of shit and clearly havn't got a clue. This was a good little story that mixed a few different genres, but definately should be within the Incest/Taboo catagory where it resides. Others seem to wanna just stick you in a pigeonhole and keep you from experimenting with other catagories... how fucking sad. I think you write well.

Despite the rape issue, the story was very erotic and hot

You have a real knack for writing, even though I didnt let it really sink in that it was a Father raping his daughter - because then the story becomes disturbing - you find yourself being drawn into what is happening and enjoying it as if it was a story of two unrelated people. Very good stuff, really loved Love and love intensely, like someone else said, it is still my favourite - hope you write more soon! x

daughter--And there are those who approve of this and are excited by this--It takes a sick MF to write this stuff and equally sick MF's to enjoy it

wtf.

"fuck me daddy!!" indicates that it's not rape.

whats wrong with you people?

dont read it if you dont like the idea.

everything about this except for the putting it in Incest/Taboo screams "role-play." and yes, it's hot.

These commenting people are so incredibley... There's not even a word for it. Stupid would be way to nice. The category clearly states "Incest/Taboo" If you don't like it, don't read it. Some people are into the idea. If you don't have anything nice to say, and if it's not constructive criticism, keep it to yourself.

This is my favorite fantasy. I loved the part where he spanked her pussy hard. I want to be Daddy's little girl.

Daddy just convinced her: she is only a lesbian when Daddys' not around. Excellent story!!

Made me cum it did its job

Love, love, love this story; it's so hot!! It's certainly one of those "cum" stories. Please keep up the good work!

Fantastic. Perfect.

Very nice written. Maybe a Girl can write such erotic stuff better then a guy. 5 stars dear.:)

I love this. It made me soooooo wet.

Such intimacy..... Loved it