by CKit
and how is this different from Cock For Doris written 9 years ago and all over the web? Why bother to just change a few names here and there? Really it is a bit of a waste of electricity to redo it.
I thoroughly enjoyed the story! It closely parallels a sceen I have watched many times myself.
But I'd be interested in seeing what else you've got.
I'd put it in Loving Wives, where your other stories did quite well. This is, after all, a story about the narrator, his wife, and their relationship. Not how I'd want to live, but still - it's definitely a "wife" story.
My name here is MonetAA, and I am writing a few stories myself. This one really made me wet, and it is something I wish I could witness.