All Comments on 'Dormroom Performance'

Everyone knows a "Gary". It's about time something good happened to him. I chuckled all the way through, the imagery was good, I could picture a friend of mine. Author did a good job of injecting humor into an erotic story.

A good, probable plot. Thanks for a good, funny read.

Love it!!!!!

You should have a repeat performance. Maybe the fat guy taking the lead.

I really enjoyed this story. Thank you.

i like this one, i keep coming back once a year for this story. maybe you should expand on this story.

I liked it because the erotic basis is intelligently written, and, supported by good dialogue, and smooth flow.

Thank you for a good story.