All Comments on 'Double Take'

Excellent writing. Vivid descriptions - especially the delicious details. Believable characters.

Petite? Peut-être... innocente? Ca c'est pas possible... :-)

Look forward to more storytelling from your hand.

Made me want to buy a ticket and take off. Will there be a mile high club portion? Cant wait for more from you.

Hot stuff and very realistic except for the absence of non-natural lube.

a good fantasy but i can't begin to imagine it being true. Perhaps my imagination's limited. But I would like to see more dialogue. Why is the girl so needy so wanton?

Anal is not usually my thing but the story is well written and hot.

This girl can really write and shes not innocente!

Very good story. Imaginative and, contrary to one comment, only one thing beats saliva as the best lube (and its all natural too!). My only complaint, and its a minor one, was that it wrapped up a bit quickly. All in all, a very sexy and hot story/fantasy. Thanks!

This was exquisite, wonderful, I am so horny right now that I have to leave soon, but I wanted to deliver kudos to you. One thing. She seemed a bit TOO brisk as she left him in that closet, after a fucking like that, she would be a bit wobbly at least. But damn. The story makes up for it in many ways. Only suggestion would be for her to...Wobble a bit.. Maybe even something like "with an almost imperceptible shiver" or something. Still tho, GREAT JOB.

Great description and details, hhot scene, hot sex

Cant ask for anything more- well maybe some dp and more cunt fucking, next time. Great story

That was definitely hot and far from innocente! But it was very descriptive and very well written. Good job, and I hope to read more from you!

Very well done!

I love anal stories, especially when written by women. This was certainly different - an anal story written by a women in a man's perspective.

Very nice.