All Comments on 'Doug Ellis Ch. 02'

Too many random characters being introduced at once. I hope you take it in some direction rather than just describing horny man after horny man. I love the guy thinking if he should report something he saw through a spy hole. lol

I agree with the anon below. I think it would have better been named a general name like the name of the prison or some such thing since two chapters in, the titled character has been introduced briefly in a few sentences and the object of lust of the other officer. It just seems like a lot of random characters/events with no clear storyline yet. I'll read another chapter to see if any clear point to these vignettes becomes apparent or about doug ellis, but I am not sure it will.