All Comments on 'Dove'

by Rangerbrook

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
fun!

inspired writing, great premise.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
hmm very good story...

I really liked this story..it wouldn't be to bad if you felt like writing more to this story ..you know kinda like what happens next..;) great story though.you should definitely write more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
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Chapter 2! Chapter 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wow!

I absolutely LOVED this story. Hot, fantastic, erotic. Would definitely enjoy reading more to it, should you post more. ;)

virginsuccubusvirginsuccubusalmost 14 years ago
So freaking awesome!

I can't help but wonder where you got the inspiration for this. It's wonderful!

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