All Comments on 'Down by the River Ch. 05'

for a really beautiful story. something way to rare here.

Terrific character develpment and plot. Thanks for sharing

I think you did really well, the two men were perhaps too wonderfully well behaved/perfect, but hey, it's a story isn't it, and I loved it. Great sex too! Cheers

I was completely enthralled by this story! It was so beautifully written with great characters and a delightful storyline! I am kind of sad that there is no more to read of this story!

Although at first, I wasn't sure which time frame the story was occurring in, I truly did enjoy this story. It's simply... great.

I hope I'm not the only one demanding you write a story regarding Marcus!

KC

Loved the whole story .

Beautifully written!

This series is even better than the 'obsession' series of yours I read earlier. And that's saying something as it is one of my favorites. Infact allow me to say that the narrative, characters, romance and story is far better than some of the "published under the big lables" works I have read. You have amazing talent girl! :)

Just one thing I would point out, the dialogues. Though good and amusing they somehow belong more to the current time period than to the time you set the story in. Don't take this too hashly as I really do not know much about writing and all and was an alltime low scorer in english class:P The reason I appreciate good writers is exactly because I know how difficult and creative their job is.

And by the way, congratulate your editor on perfect editing.

Way to go! :)

G

Very good story, I could not stop reading it, thank you! You are very gifted.

It had everything that makes a wonderful romance...love, lust, seduction. Best of all it's a completed series. So many times on this site, most stories are left unfinished. Thank you,

well done that I just had to thank you for your time and talent!

This old man never thought he would enjoy romance so much. Wonderful story line.

Please keep up the good writing for us.