All Comments on 'Down for the Count'

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lickoyeeshisindaylickoyeeshisindayabout 15 years ago
AM I...

missing something or is there a new technique for 69ing. How can you have eye contact, without hurtig yourself, while engaging in it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
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It never ceases to amaze me that readers comments criticize stories that are merely fantasies as if they are real life happenings. You writers must get awfully tired of them. This was a fun read of a fantasy - unscore fantasy! I for one look forward to your next submittal.

socrazy143socrazy143about 15 years agoAuthor
Read it closer

It is a sideways 69 and they are taking turns. Fairly easy to have eye contact.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
unrealistic

way to unrealistic no guy would ever want anything to do with his sister after she embaressed him like that especially if she was 16 years older then he was like you said

blackbowblackbowalmost 13 years ago
VERY NICE VERY HOT

HOTTTTTTTT

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Need another chapter

mafia_patriarchmafia_patriarchover 11 years ago

I like the realistic dialogue, it's like a script.

fanofrexfanofrexalmost 11 years ago
nice

short but cute. more like this but a little longer in length.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
What

What

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Have to say that was pretty good

Is there any chance for a continuation of the story may be a part 2

LodrikLodrikover 7 years ago
To short

I would love a longer version too

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Wow

Very very short but hot n lovely

Enjoyed it just angry its too short..

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