All Comments on 'Down Low Sisters'

sam sucks

too many

Starting off with comments about life paths and universal truths seemed to suggest that there would be some depth developing, but this story doesn't get out of the shallow end either in political power struggles or in illicit faculty-student sex.

The concept you describe is a worthy one. Try telling it in such a way that your listeners will lean forward in their seats and squirm, just a little, with arousal. If reading it out loud to your lover doesn't start to warm her up, its time for a re-write.