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Anonymousalmost 15 years agopretty okay
LIked the idea but the story was over before it had really begun. Was just a bit too short. Try to fill it with life...say: more personality to the people you write about.
Good luck!
Greyfox69over 13 years agoTENS unit put to good use
I like the story and I think there is more than an element of truth in it. Keep writing and using the TENS unit!
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