All Comments on 'Downsides and Upsides'

Even though it could stand alone as a great read, it does have the makings of a fabulous series. Couldn't give you the five star because of my pet peeve with ellipses. Best of luck to you and I can't wait to read more.

I thought it was fantastic. Very likable characters, and I loved the premise.

Nice start to the series and a good, believable premise for the enhanced abilities....I look forward to reading more of your submissions....

NOOO! I never wanted this story to end. More Please!

I swear I've read a much longer version of this story elsewhere, I just can't remember where. And I do mean this exact story, but the version I read started before this and went on long after...

Holy fucking shit.

You wrote New Universe fanfic.

You wrote *erotic* New Universe fanfic.

Somewhere, Mark Gruenwald is laughing.