by RoniGrace
Please, keep on writing, and do something a little longer one of these days. Now that you have "wet your feet' on this site, give us more info in the bio, please.
Roni, you can write up a storm, and your debut pieces are really hot. More! But please, before you click on the "submit" link, read your story one last time. I'm sending my quibbles via "Send Feedback", but you know the technicals--just take a few more minutes to go over your story, and help the Union of Concerned Quibblers to find other writers to quibble.
I enjoyed the story and you have a nice start.
You may consider having Kevin charge extra for the guys to go all the way and fuck his GF, of course have them learn how to put a condom on as part of the course :) --- safe sex...
Thank you for writing the story
Well written story with great story line. You were able to provide visual images were realistic and brevity is appreciated. Again, very well written. Thanks.