All Comments on 'Dr. Sex'

by RoniGrace

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Kat0511Kat0511almost 13 years ago
Very hot

Looking forward to the next lesson...

max052max052almost 13 years ago

Very good build-up. Very hot story, five stars. Thanks for sharing.

Max52

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Three Lovely Vignettes

Please, keep on writing, and do something a little longer one of these days. Now that you have "wet your feet' on this site, give us more info in the bio, please.

estragonestragonalmost 13 years ago
Really Good Story

Roni, you can write up a storm, and your debut pieces are really hot. More! But please, before you click on the "submit" link, read your story one last time. I'm sending my quibbles via "Send Feedback", but you know the technicals--just take a few more minutes to go over your story, and help the Union of Concerned Quibblers to find other writers to quibble.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
enjoyable read

I enjoyed the story and you have a nice start.

You may consider having Kevin charge extra for the guys to go all the way and fuck his GF, of course have them learn how to put a condom on as part of the course :) --- safe sex...

Thank you for writing the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Excellent read

Well written story with great story line. You were able to provide visual images were realistic and brevity is appreciated. Again, very well written. Thanks.

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