by dragonesque
i really hate it when someone writes a story without knowing the first thing about what they are writing about DRAGONS DON'T HAVE BREASTS they lay eggs which there young come out of fully developed and breasts are meant for carnivores who's stomachs lack the ability to process meat but dragons dont have that problem becuase they come out of there eggs fully developed
If you have something to say make sure its either congradulatory or helpful. If you do not like the fact that your preconcieved notions of what every single dragon must look like do not match up with an authors opinions, then too bad. If You don't like it then you should go somewhere else and not bother us about why you dislike it unless you have some way to fix it. You're wasting my time that could be better used elsewhere. I know that dragons generally lack breasts, but in this story they're there and there's nothing you can say or do that can change that. Adeiu
what happened to the evil king? u start the story with him but never say a never thing about him again, sure it's where the story came from, but still, would not mind knowing what happened to him.
so they dont wear close but he does wear leggings
so they dont have less than three kids, but keep having single births